Fiolee High School Fan Fiction? Thoughts?

This actually came out reasonably. I don't like everything about it, but it's cute. The sketch looked much worse than this, and considering I'm new to humans, this isn't half bad.

LOOK AT THE ANIME BACKGROUND. I TRIED. Also, it's all wobbly but I can't draw straight lines, so.

FioLee? I like FioLee better than Finn/FP or Finn/Marclene. Finn/Marcelene is all platonic and "YUSH WE SHALL NOW ADVENTURE NOW" but Marshall/Fionna is just... KISS. Kiss right fricking now.

Confused? What the heck am I talking about? High School Fan fiction? Allow me to shed some light on the subject. I recently got a fan fiction account while my tablet was being a butt, so I've been posting Divergent Fanfictions, and then I saw FioLee and I was like HAHAHAHA YUP. THIS IS HAPPENING. And so I went to draw it, and it came out like shit using the mouse, so I began writing the Fan Fiction instead. Now that I have a skeleton plot for which I can wrap the juicy details around, I decided to make a cover for it. Marshal basically asks Fionna out in front of all his punk friends, and then she says no, no way in heck, and he gets embarrassed by the rejection and whispers in her ear, "You know, I know who you like." And then this happens. Marshall Lee does actually end up falling in love with Fionna, even though he only asked her out because of a bet and she only said yes to keep a secret. I need your reviews on whether this seems like something that'd happen.

Other than that, three words: I. Need. Practice.

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Art ©: neokasey82

Plot Concept ©: neokasey82

Fionna/Marshall Lee ©: Cartoon Network/Adventure Time

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